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Tricia
08-29-02, 07:52 PM
Creation
by Tricia

Darkness all around
void except for a God
light from the source
a voice
it is good.
Water, water, everywhere
separated to create nothing
Heaven
water below, now combined
seas
where water once was
now land
a voice
it is good.
Green covers tucking in the earth
stretching vegetation
a voice
It is good.
A blazing ball of fire
day
a dull sphere of white
specks of light
night
a voice
it is good.
Water still
now full of life
sky bare
now full of life
land vacant
now full of life
a voice
it is good.
Earth full yet empty
an idea
man.
Dust comes alive
A being of The Being
A job given
Responsibility.
Everything under man
a voice
it is good.



yeah, it's freestyle, and it's my first time to write poetry. :blush:

Kittycat
08-29-02, 08:01 PM
YOURS IS SOOOO COOL!!!

Mine stinks.

Yes me who does good at "Fweestyle"....She gave us a specific topic. I do whats on my mind...

*lol*

I though we were only to do it on Genesis 1-2. Oh well still awesome!

Tricia
08-29-02, 08:06 PM
I'm honored.

You are the queen of freestyle. :D

Kittycat
08-29-02, 08:12 PM
:blush: :blush: :blush:

aaaaaw thankies Tricia

:)

butterfly
08-29-02, 10:46 PM
Ooo, me likes. :) Good job!