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Nampula
08-06-02, 04:07 AM
very rarely am i comfortable sharing my poetry with people, but i'm very happy with this one & i wanted to know what you think. the subject is the title.

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& it peels the skin off
to expose bone & flesh & blood

& water.

an outpouring.
was your heart broken when you screamed?
cleaved unneatly by the spear (did i hold it?)
was your sweat genuine-- not saline but sanguine?
why were you afraid?
i appeal to you
like jacob in his cave
do not leave me until i get my blessing.

HeatherlyButterfly
08-06-02, 11:05 AM
WOW is all I can say at this time.