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06-01-02, 08:54 PM
Finally Home

I can smell the fragrance of your holy presence.
Your divine love and pure forgiveness surrounds me.
Even though I have walked through the valley of the shadow of spiritual death, You have walked along side me, like a gentle lamb, awaiting me to accept You as my savior.
When I come to your temple being in Your presence enlightens me to you love. You too, have been on this earth, through valleys and mountains.
But now I have come to you, for a rebirth, in this wondrous garden. I can feel Your arms embracing me. This time itís different. This time, Iím home to stay.

06-03-02, 12:06 PM
I liked it :) Good word choices. It really made me feel good and that God is with me through it all. Thanks for sharing your poem.


06-03-02, 12:47 PM
oooo; i like it neddie. i really like it. good job ;)