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arielgirl
05-10-02, 06:14 PM
no title

creeping along
always wondering
what it is about it that's the defect
pluck a hair
wear the shirt
something that makes you feel untrue
trying
vieing
for attention
for affection
getting rejection
i don't care
i don't care
i don't care
i don't......
know why i care
if you love me
if you hate me
dressed up in paisley, wearing green
what about blue?
what if i held my head under water?
would it make you speak.....
to me that is
i don't care
i don't care
i don't care
i don't......
know why i care
you're not even my type
you're not even enjoyable
to the brain
all fluff and fodder
unintelligence and cream
on second thought
i am better.

~amy

arielgirl
05-10-02, 06:19 PM
Scratch

Scratch out a hole
and live inside.
How long you remain
is up to you.
A day, a week, a lifetime.
Keep scratching
you have nothing else to do.
And when you reach
the coveted side
turn around.
Scratch out a hole
and live inside.
Keep scratching
you have nothing else to do.

~Amy

arielgirl
05-10-02, 06:22 PM
no title

waste a dime
your time
no this isn't going to rhyme
if you have it
waste it
not on
me
on you
your compadres
flail it
at me
teasing
wheezing
with your puffed up self-absorbtion
upper hand
you're thinking subconsciously
neither
for me
against me
as long as i comply

~Amy

Barney
05-11-02, 09:28 PM
Hey there,

they're good. I really liked the first one especially the "I don't..." and the bit that goes......

all fluff and fodder
unintelligence and cream

tee hee....cool!!!!

Vinnie
05-12-02, 07:05 PM
When are you going to write a poem about me? :D

Flannel Avenger
05-12-02, 07:36 PM
Yeah, you promised us a Dr. Suess Tyrant story!

arielgirl
05-13-02, 08:16 PM
Thanks Barney:) That's actually describing a couple people I know.

Vinnie and Flannel...you two have no class!! Actually I will work on it if I remember, it should prove interesting.

Flannel Avenger
05-13-02, 10:01 PM
HEY!! Don't group me in with Tyrant-boy!

arielgirl
05-13-02, 11:56 PM
Ah, you're both cut from the same cloth. However you are nicer to me than the Tyrant, so I will apologize for grouping you with him...

~Amy

Vinnie
05-14-02, 12:12 AM
Nicer than me? Why lie? Let out your true feelings. Its unhealthy to supress them :p

Flannel Avenger
05-14-02, 01:26 PM
Cut from the same cloth? So you're saying the Tyrant really does wear Flannel?

Vinnie
05-14-02, 02:41 PM
No, thats an excessively literalistic verbal pleneray inspiration understanding of her words. A more practical and logical approach is that she meant we are both bad :p

Flannel Avenger
05-14-02, 02:48 PM
How would you know what she meant unless you were Amy?? It's not possible to know the will of Amy unless you are Amy or a distinctly chosen agent of Amy.

Nicole
05-14-02, 02:55 PM
:rofl:


you guys are cracking me up!

arielgirl
05-14-02, 11:30 PM
Dare I even post anymore poetry...?

I know how to prove Vinnie is not me, nor one of my agents...ask him to explain one of my poems. This he cannot do because he told me himself long ago that he doesn't understand them.

No I did not mean he wears flannel, although he could I have no idea. I only meant that you are both egotistical and power hungry!!

Flannel Avenger
05-14-02, 11:32 PM
You don't know me that well! How can you say I am egotistical and power hungry?

Vinnie
05-15-02, 05:30 AM
:rolleyes:

Flannel Avenger
05-15-02, 12:39 PM
Vinnie do you have something in your eye?

Vinnie
05-15-02, 02:03 PM
:rolleyes:

arielgirl
05-15-02, 11:56 PM
..yeah a plank...

theGoThIcFrOg
05-16-02, 12:17 AM
i really like the poetry i think it is great keep writing

Vinnie
05-16-02, 01:12 AM
Originally posted by arielgirl
..yeah a plank...

You see the plank in my eye but fail to see the redwood tree in your own :p

Kittycat
05-16-02, 09:23 PM
oooh that was cold....*shivers**looks at thermometer*
*-30* :eek: *pulls out her new letterman to keep warm*

Flannel Avenger
05-17-02, 12:14 AM
Oh, I wonder, did Kitty letter in any sports this year... Oh, if only she'd drop some hints around the board...

Vinnie
05-17-02, 01:38 AM
Amy can take it ;)

arielgirl
05-21-02, 05:56 PM
You see the redwood in my eye but fail to see the entire forestry industry in your own...:D

Buzz buzz buzz little gnat...

Flannel Avenger
05-21-02, 08:08 PM
HEY!! I'M THE WOOD PRODUCTS MAJOR HERE!

Vinnie
05-22-02, 12:16 AM
Originally posted by arielgirl
You see the redwood in my eye but fail to see the entire forestry industry in your own...:D

Buzz buzz buzz little gnat...

When you cry, sawdust drips down your face :p

Kittycat
05-22-02, 07:47 PM
:rolleyes:

Tricia
05-23-02, 04:02 PM
Do I sense neurotic love?

Kittycat
05-23-02, 04:14 PM
:rofl:


:biggrin:



:D



:)

arielgirl
05-29-02, 12:01 AM
Bite your tongue!

Kittycat
05-29-02, 12:13 AM
You dont rule here.......why should I bite it?

arielgirl
06-01-02, 01:03 AM
I was talking to the neurotic love comment that was made, not to your smilies!;)

Kittycat
06-01-02, 12:27 PM
*lol* figgerz.


:rofl:

just read all the earlier posts.....yeah..I am out of my mind..if I still have one that is....

Tricia
06-01-02, 02:03 PM
Originally posted by arielgirl
Bite your tongue!

not a chance in heck. :p

~Leopard~
06-02-02, 05:30 PM
why not?

Tricia
06-02-02, 08:28 PM
it's too fun. :p

arielgirl
06-03-02, 01:14 AM
I don't remember what we're arguing about...

All I know is I posted some poetry and then all heck broke out. I'm always causing a controversy. Just call me Eminem....:rolleyes: ....No wait, on second thought, don't.

~Amy

Tricia
06-03-02, 02:17 PM
What kind, plain or peanut?

Michele
06-03-02, 02:52 PM
:rofl:

Kittycat
06-03-02, 04:55 PM
Originally posted by Tricia
What kind, plain or peanut?

peanut butter and crispy also!

arielgirl
06-03-02, 07:06 PM
I am definately a peanut....

Tricia
06-03-02, 07:19 PM
OK, you are a peanut M&M. :biggrin:

Kittycat
06-03-02, 07:45 PM
which am I twicia!!!

Tricia
06-08-02, 03:02 PM
Originally posted by arielgirl
Just call me Eminem

~Amy

No, she asked me to call her an M&M. see? :biggrin:

Kittycat
06-08-02, 03:14 PM
Marshall Mathers? who wants to be called Eminem? *gag*
oh yes I am slim shady
yes I'm the real slim shady
all you other slim shady's are just immataing
so wont the real slim shady please stand up please stand up?

Flannel Avenger
06-08-02, 07:58 PM
*GAG*

arielgirl
06-11-02, 12:07 AM
So now would be a bad time to say I like the new album.....? :angel: