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Barney
03-16-02, 07:08 PM
This is my poem.....after many unsuccessful attempts, I have at last mastered it! (please, Lord!)

Again, send criticisms my way! Also, all the hate mail...especially from the mods....sorry guys!

Barney
03-16-02, 07:10 PM
Faith

trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear?
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear?
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear
trust in the lord and it will all become clear

Barney
03-16-02, 07:13 PM
It is quite hard to read at first, so here's what the words actually say.


I am a sinner
Lord come, stand, bear the land.
He will come, still able
He lit; heal all; stone roll
True,
Truth,
Trust;
A lord so dear.
Sin?
A tear…then shame.
We shall trust?
Dance, hear the truth:
The lord will come; trust and it will become clear
Trust in the lord and it will all become clear



If anyone wants to attempt to explain the poem, I'd be interested to hear that too!

butterfly
03-16-02, 09:00 PM
Ooo....that's really neat!

HeatherlyButterfly
03-17-02, 12:09 AM
i really like that...